Post by Chris Jericho on Nov 24, 2007 23:16:58 GMT -5
This is lesson number two taught by me hailz, or well better known on here as chris jericho.
This was put here for me to help you become better at your rps and im not trying to rub in or anything e.c.t because im not like that so before i start any of these i want to say i dont think of my self any higher then anyone else if you get me lol,
lets begin.
Ok your second lesson with match rps is Content.
I mean yeah length and quality and looks will be in there As well but right now lets focuss on the content.
Repeating:
Ok this is found often in the rping world, and that is repeatitive stuff like for eg: You drag out the same subject.
Jericho smiled as he stood in the middle of the ring he smiled at all the fans in the arena and he smiled for the people at home and he smiled at jr and king and he smoled at his gf candice michelle who smiled eagerly at him the smiling around the arena was extremele the fans were smiling at home and the fans sitting in there seat were smiling and jericho was smiling and jr and king were smiling and candice was smiling.
Nobody wants to see that sure smiling is a good thing to be doing lol, but repeating the same word in your rps makes you look completely unporfessional and yes my students (Matt striker wannabe look lol) there is a way we can fix this problem and yet another website that can help improve our ability or even a book if you wish and that is *drumroll* the lovely ........ Thesaurus
thesaurus.reference.com/ - online thesaurus
Just type in your word and it will come up with diffrent words that you can use that still incase the same meaning of the orriganal word you wished to use.
If you do this it dos enot only make you look more smarter but it increases the quality of your rps.
WWE Promos:
Ok sure we all love the work of wwe, or otherwise we wouldnt be here right?
Ok sure you may use a few promos from the wwe.
EG:The promo between stacy and randy.
But my advice to you all is dont copy it completely sure it might seem like a good thing to do at the time, i thought it was when i first started rpign too, i copied th candice and vince thing lol it didnt turn out preety lol so please people listen to me come up with your own ideas they are so much better and really original and worth reading, and you will get heaps more compliments,
oh but if you want to really badly do a promo from the wwe well copy it down exactly and then make it as if your superstar is watching it on tv lol.
Horrible coupling:
ok everyone wants to manage someone but for a storyline to work out you have to pick a couple that you could easily see being together, like shane and torrie , or randy and candice its just you would never see linda mcmahon dating big vis ect its just the storyline wouldnt work or otherwise it would be harder then it should be for you to make it work if you get me?
in my life time i have seen some preety nasty couplings surrounding the rping world like shane Mcmahon and Stephanie McMahon, who wants to see that? none there family its disgusting.
so try and couple people off realisticly and everything should run smoothly.
Stupid fight areas:
ok here is another thing that is bad through the rping world as well, you would never in your life veiw superstars fighting on the white house roof or on the top of the efiel tower please keep the fights in the ring or in the arena or on the road outside the arena and it will be more real and better it will be more fun and better trust me.
killing off Superstars:
This is a ultimate NO NO do not kill off superstars well unless there caws but not real superstars, it is a complete dissreaspect and you will deffinetly get hate mail for killing them off they dedicate there lives to us they traina dn eat the right food 24/7 just to impress us there fas.
Your bound to find somebody who loves the sperstars you kill off thus there is no reason to kill them off unless you are pretending to kill them off for only to brign them back bigger and better then that can be bareable but still be bound to expect the hate mail
This was put here for me to help you become better at your rps and im not trying to rub in or anything e.c.t because im not like that so before i start any of these i want to say i dont think of my self any higher then anyone else if you get me lol,
lets begin.
Ok your second lesson with match rps is Content.
I mean yeah length and quality and looks will be in there As well but right now lets focuss on the content.
Repeating:
Ok this is found often in the rping world, and that is repeatitive stuff like for eg: You drag out the same subject.
Jericho smiled as he stood in the middle of the ring he smiled at all the fans in the arena and he smiled for the people at home and he smiled at jr and king and he smoled at his gf candice michelle who smiled eagerly at him the smiling around the arena was extremele the fans were smiling at home and the fans sitting in there seat were smiling and jericho was smiling and jr and king were smiling and candice was smiling.
Nobody wants to see that sure smiling is a good thing to be doing lol, but repeating the same word in your rps makes you look completely unporfessional and yes my students (Matt striker wannabe look lol) there is a way we can fix this problem and yet another website that can help improve our ability or even a book if you wish and that is *drumroll* the lovely ........ Thesaurus
thesaurus.reference.com/ - online thesaurus
Just type in your word and it will come up with diffrent words that you can use that still incase the same meaning of the orriganal word you wished to use.
If you do this it dos enot only make you look more smarter but it increases the quality of your rps.
WWE Promos:
Ok sure we all love the work of wwe, or otherwise we wouldnt be here right?
Ok sure you may use a few promos from the wwe.
EG:The promo between stacy and randy.
But my advice to you all is dont copy it completely sure it might seem like a good thing to do at the time, i thought it was when i first started rpign too, i copied th candice and vince thing lol it didnt turn out preety lol so please people listen to me come up with your own ideas they are so much better and really original and worth reading, and you will get heaps more compliments,
oh but if you want to really badly do a promo from the wwe well copy it down exactly and then make it as if your superstar is watching it on tv lol.
Horrible coupling:
ok everyone wants to manage someone but for a storyline to work out you have to pick a couple that you could easily see being together, like shane and torrie , or randy and candice its just you would never see linda mcmahon dating big vis ect its just the storyline wouldnt work or otherwise it would be harder then it should be for you to make it work if you get me?
in my life time i have seen some preety nasty couplings surrounding the rping world like shane Mcmahon and Stephanie McMahon, who wants to see that? none there family its disgusting.
so try and couple people off realisticly and everything should run smoothly.
Stupid fight areas:
ok here is another thing that is bad through the rping world as well, you would never in your life veiw superstars fighting on the white house roof or on the top of the efiel tower please keep the fights in the ring or in the arena or on the road outside the arena and it will be more real and better it will be more fun and better trust me.
killing off Superstars:
This is a ultimate NO NO do not kill off superstars well unless there caws but not real superstars, it is a complete dissreaspect and you will deffinetly get hate mail for killing them off they dedicate there lives to us they traina dn eat the right food 24/7 just to impress us there fas.
Your bound to find somebody who loves the sperstars you kill off thus there is no reason to kill them off unless you are pretending to kill them off for only to brign them back bigger and better then that can be bareable but still be bound to expect the hate mail